2020-2021学年通用版高一下学期英语写作衔接精练：01 求助信+读后续写+概要写作(解析版)

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2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）01

求助信+读后续写+概要写作

1．假定你是李华，刚进入高一的你遇到了很多困难。请你给你的英国朋友Jack写封邮件求助，内容包括：

1.告知你所遇到的困难(比如感到孤单、不敢与别人交流、英语学习跟不上等)； 2.恳请他给出建议。 注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Jack,

How's everything going? I've been in this new school for a month, but I still find it difficult to get used to the life here.

To be honest, I've met some difficulties. First, I feel lonely here because I'm far away from

my family and old friends. Besides, I'm too shy to communicate with my new classmates or teachers. What's worse, it's hard for me to catch up with the English courses, which really upsets me.

Would you be kind enough to offer me some suggestions? I will be grateful if you do so. I'm looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Jack写封邮件，因为你刚进入高一就遇到了很多困难，写信向他求助。 【详解】 第一步：审题 体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。 结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求：

1.告知你所遇到的困难(比如感到孤单、不敢与别人交流、英语学习跟不上等)； 2.恳请他给出建议。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

get used to; to be honest; lonely; far away from; too…to…; communicate with; catch up with; upset; suggestion; be grateful; look forward to 第三步：连词成句

1. I've been in this new school for a month, but I still find it difficult to get used to the life here. 2. To be honest, I've met some difficulties.

3. First, I feel lonely here because I'm far away from my family and old friends. 4. Besides, I'm too shy to communicate with my new classmates or teachers.

5. What's worse, it's hard for me to catch up with the English courses, which really upsets me. 6. Would you be kind enough to offer me some suggestions? 7. I will be grateful if you do so.

8.I'm looking forward to your early reply.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：First

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides 3.表转折对比关系：but

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】

[高分句型1] First, I feel lonely here because I'm far away from my family and old friends. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)

[高分句型2] What's worse, it's hard for me to catch up with the English courses, which really upsets me. (运用了which引导非性定语从句)

2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Michael goes to his grandparents once or twice every month, and he decided to go round to see them when he had a free evening the week before they went for a holiday.

“Come in, Michael,” his grandfather said. “I’m glad you’ve come round. Take your coat off and sit down for a minute. Let’s see the end of this programme on TV. Your grandmother and I watch it every week at this time of night.” So Michael sat in a comfortable chair, quietly waiting for the TV detective（侦探）to find out who the thief was.

Finally, his grandmother got up and turned the TV off. Then, she said, “I’m sorry, Michael, but I must go and see a friend for a few minutes. I’ll come back soon. But while I’m out, perhaps you can help your grandfather to bring down the big blue case from the attic（阁楼）it for the holiday.”

They watched her going by. “Let’s go round to the pubfor a drink, ” grandfather said. （小店）“That’s a good idea,” Michael answered, “but let me give you a hand with the case. Tell me where it is and I’ll get it out for you. It’s in the attic, isn’t it?”

Grandfather pulled down the corners of his mouth. “That’s the trouble. It’s not there. You can go up and look, but you won’t find it. Perhaps, I lend it to somebody, but I can’t remember. Your grandmother doesn’t know, but she’ll find out this week that we’ve lost our best case.” Michael

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laughed, “Don’t worry. You can use mine. If I go home now I can bring it back in half an hour.” And he went home quickly before the old man could say no.

When he got home, his father called, “What are you looking for, Michael? You’re throwing your things about, aren’t you?” 注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

But when Michael explained why he would lend his case to grandfather, his father suddenly felt ashamed.

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Michael’s grandmother came back from her friend’s at that moment.

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】

But when Michael explained why he would lend his case to grandfather, his father suddenly felt ashamed. “Oh dear, I’m the one who borrowed the blue case the year before last,” his father cried, “Michael, please take it back for me and tell grandfather I’m very sorry.” When Michael walked into his grandparents’ house with their lost case, grandfather laughed, “Your father borrowed it, I remember now. But let’s not tell your grandmother. Put it against the wall there.”

Michael’s grandmother came back from her friend’s at that moment. When she saw the case by the wall, she laughed happily. Then she picked it up and found a small label-Michael’s father’s name and address on it. She suddenly understood why her husband did not want to go to the attic to look for the case. Because it was lost long ago. And he didn’t tell her the truth for fear of breaking her heart. What a loving lie! Grandmother came over and hugged grandfather tightly, with tears of happiness in her eyes. 【分析】

本文以箱子为线索展开，讲述了Michael的爷爷奶奶在要去旅游之际，要找到自己家心爱的行李箱为旅游做准备，但是奶奶却忘记行李箱已丢，这时爷爷为避免奶奶伤心，也没有揭穿。出人意料的是，在Michael帮忙的过程中，在父亲那儿把箱子找到。 【详解】

1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“当Michael向父亲解释了他为什么要把箱子借给爷爷时，他的父亲突然感到很羞愧”可知，箱子的丢失和父亲有关，所以第一段可描写父亲和这个箱子之间的故事；②由第二段首句内容“这时奶奶从朋友家回来”可知，第二段可描写奶奶看到箱子后发生的事。

2.续写线索：回家——找箱子——父亲解释——把箱子拿回家——想起——感悟

3.词汇激活（一个词汇要写出相近的表达）行为类①借箱子：borrow the case/ lend the case②带回箱子：take it bace/bring it back③.突然想起：suddenly remember/come to realize情绪类①.高兴地：happily②.幸福的眼泪：with tears of happiness in her eyes. 【点睛】

高分句型1：I’m the one who borrowed the blue case the year before last. 本句中用到who引导的定语从句

高分句型2： What a loving lie!本句是一个what引导的感叹句。 3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Social Practice

Social practice has been more and more popular in schools. Senior school students are asked to enter society and get some ideas of it. Surely，social practice has many advantages. Firstly，social practice can offer students a chance to contact society and meet different kinds of people. In this way students can gain some precious social experience，which will be useful to their future career. Secondly，students can apply what they have learned in class to practical work，thus

knowing themselves more clearly. Thirdly，social practice can bring them some financial reward and make them more independent of their family.

However，some problems may arise if no correct guidance is made. For example，some students get overly interested in social practice and want to work full-time and earn more money，thus neglecting their studies. And some students are likely to get in touch with the dark side of society，which will affect their future values.

In order to carry out social practice smoothly，students should first know their objective. They should put their studies in the first place and see social practice just as a useful supplement (补充)，so they ought to try to strike a balance between social practice and their studies. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】

Social practice, which has been more and more popular in schools, enriches students' social experience, puts their knowledge into practice and rewards them with money. However it may affect their studies and their future values due to getting overly interested in social practice. Therefore, students should put their studies in the first place and balance their studies and social practice. 【分析】

本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，社会实践，在学校已经越来越受欢迎，丰富了学生的社会经验，把他们的知识付诸实践，并奖励他们金钱。然而，过度热衷于社会实践可能会影响他们的学习和未来的价值观。因此，学生应该把学习放在第一位，并平衡他们的学习和社会实践。 【详解】

1 要点摘录①Social practice has been more and more popular in schools.

②In this way students can gain some precious social experience，which will be useful to their future career.

③Secondly，students can apply what they have learned in class to practical work，thus knowing

themselves more clearly.

④Thirdly，social practice can bring them some financial reward and make them more independent of their family.

⑤For example，some students get overly interested in social practice and want to work full-time and earn more money，thus neglecting their studies.

⑥They should put their studies in the first place and see social practice just as a useful supplement (补充)，so they ought to try to strike a balance between social practice and their studies.

2.缜密构思将第1、2、3、4四个要点进行整合，将第5、6两个要点进行重组。3.遣词造句Social practice has been more and more popular in schools, which enriches students' social experience, puts their knowledge into practice and rewards them with money.

Some students get overly interested in social practice and want to work full-time and earn more money，neglecting their studies.

They should put their studies in the first place and try to strike a balance between social practice and their studies. 【点睛】

[高分句型1] Social practice, which has been more and more popular in schools, enriches students' social experience, puts their knowledge into practice and rewards them with money.运用一个which引导的定语从句对原文第一段进行了概括。

[高分句型2]：However it may affect their studies and their future values due to getting overly interested in social practice.用due to引出的原因状语对第二段进行了概括，表达非常高级。