04 邀请信+读后续写+概要写作-2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练(通用版)(解析版)

2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）04

邀请信+读后续写+概要写作

1．假如你是李华，你市将举办中华美食节（Chinese Gourmet Festival）, 请你给你的外教Henry写一封邮件，邀请他一同前往。内容包括：

1.活动的时间、地点；

2.活动内容。

注意:

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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【答案】

Dear Henry,

How is it going? Knowing that there is going to be a Chinese Gourmet Festival in our city’s central square, I am writing to invite you to go there.

The festival is scheduled to be held this Sunday, during which, not only will you enjoy a super \"full Chinese breakfast\" of dim sum and tea, but you will come across stinky tofu that is hard to resist. Moreover, a hands-on opportunity will be provided to cook your favorite dish under the guidance of a cook.

Since you are crazy about Chinese traditional food, I sincerely hope you can accept my invitation.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Henry写封邮件，邀请他参加中华美食节。

【详解】

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1.活动的时间、地点；

2.活动内容。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

a Chinese Gourmet Festival; invite sb. to do sth.; not only…but (also)…; come across; resist; a hands-on opportunity; under the guidance of; be crazy about; invitation

第三步：连词成句

1. Knowing that there is going to be a Chinese gourmet festival in our city’s central square, I am writing to invite you to go there.

2. The festival is scheduled to be held this Sunday, during which, not only will you enjoy a super \"full Chinese breakfast\" of dim sum and tea, but you will come across stinky tofu that is hard to resist.

3. Moreover, a hands-on opportunity will be provided to cook your favorite dish under the guidance of a cook.

4. Since you are crazy about Chinese traditional food, I sincerely hope you can accept my invitation.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

表并列补充关系： Moreover，not only…but (also)…

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】

[高分句型1] The festival is scheduled to be held this Sunday, during which not only will you enjoy a super \"full Chinese breakfast\" of dim sum and tea, but you will come across stinky tofu that is hard to resist. (运用了部分倒装和“介词+关系代词”结构非性定语从句)

[高分句型2] Since you are crazy about Chinese traditional food, I sincerely hope you can accept my invitation. (运用了since引导原因状语从句)

2．阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Having just graduated from high school, I was 18 and living with my parents in Denver, Colorado. That summer I decided to take my most daring trip ever. I wanted to go to Utah to visit a dear friend I'd known for four years. My father had given me a small street motorcycle as a graduation present, and I worked out a plan to ride it to Utah.

I was to get an early start, ride all day, and arrive at my destination (Paradise, Utah) that evening. Arriving in Ogden, Utah in the late afternoon, I looked at my map for another route to save time. A small line on the map indicated an unimproved road heading northeast-straight to the little town of Paradise!

Of course I headed for it. The road quickly became single, dirty lane, winding through fields. As long as it was dry, surely I'd be OK. Suddenly, I lost control of the motorcycle and it fell over. I didn't get hurt because wasn't going fast, but I was puzzled and couldn't figure out what had happened.

It was dark. While my headlight showed me where the road was, I couldn't tell its condition, only that it was smooth. I started again, and once more fell over after a few feet. I looked around and found myself alone in a high mountain field. For the first time during the trip I started to get worried. A few minutes later I couldn't believe what I saw-a pair of headlights bouncing along the road toward me, coming from the direction I was heading for!

The man driving the small truck stopped and asked if I needed any help. Not the type to bother others with my problems, I said I thought I could get where I was going on my own, but thanked him for the offer.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式作答。

He explained the problem—a rain had fallen during the day.

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I asked him why he was out there in the field at such a late hour.

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【答案】

He explained the problem—a rain had fallen during the day. I then realized why the road

was so slippery and muddy. After another unsuccessful attempt I finally accepted his help, and we loaded the motorcycle into the back of his truck. He turned around and took me back in the direction he came from. He asked me where I was going and I told him I was going to visit a friend in Paradise. It happened that he had planned to go back to Paradise that evening.

I asked him why he was out there in the field at such a late hour. He told me he was a

roadman. He had a feeling that he needed to go down the road, but wasn't sure why. Then he found me. It took us the better part of an hour to make it to the next paved road. All the while I was amazed that he was able and willing to be there. He was so kind that he drove me to my friend's home, which made me less worried. I will always be grateful to him for going out of his way on a dark night to the middle of nowhere to help me.

【分析】

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者想骑着摩托车去犹他州拜访朋友，为了节省时间选择了抄近路，小路不好走，作者在路上摔车了，四周只有作者一个人。这时，遇到了一个开小卡车的人，那人主动提出帮助作者，但作者一开始拒绝了。

【详解】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“他解释了问题所在——白天下了一场雨。”可知，第一段可描写卡车司机是如何帮助作者的。

②由第二段首句内容“我问他为什么这么晚了还在外面。”可知，第二段可描写作者对卡车司机的了解以及如何在他的帮助下到达朋友家的。

2.续写线索：作者接受帮助——司机表示顺路——作者了解司机——司机送作者到朋友家——作者感激

3.词汇激活

行为类

①搬运：load into/ move into

②计划：plan to/ aim to/ intend to

③询问：ask/ inquire

情绪类

①感谢：be grateful /show appreciation to

②惊讶：amazed / surprised

【点睛】

[高分句型1] He asked me where I was going and I told him I was going to visit a friend in Paradise. (运用了where引导宾语从句)

[高分句型2] He was so kind that he drove me to my friend's home, which made me less worried. (运用了so…that…引导结果状语从句和which引导非性定语从句)

3．读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

This incident happened over twenty years ago when I was in high school. There was a debate competition in my neighbouring school. My friend and I volunteered to participate in the debate. There were many topics to choose from and I choose to speak on AIDS.

Even though I had no idea what the competition would be like, I decided to go ahead and prepare for it and I used an article from a magazine as reference.

On the day of the event, I practiced my lines but was feeling nervous as there would be many listeners and the stage fear was chasing me already and truly it caught up with me. I reached the auditorium (礼堂), and it was large. The competition began, and I was getting sweaty palms. I was at a loss when the speaker before my turn unexpectedly had chosen the same topic as me and also referred to the same magazine and reproduced it line by line, leaving me in a daze (恍惚) on what to do next as I just had a couple of minutes with me.

Soon enough I was on the stage and I could gather courage and speak for only two minutes. I felt so bad. I had not only let my school down but also myself. I then decided to put in my best efforts and overcome my stage fear and prepare well for the next debate. Luckily I did not have to wait long as the next competition was organized by my school.

This time my topic was against castes (印度的种姓；等级制度) in indian society. I wrote the script with my own efforts and practiced for hours in front of the mirror even though I had learned the script by heart.

The day came and this time I was confident about myself, I just went about doing my job and lasted for five minutes. I had a very satisfied feeling coming from within. When the results

were announced, I had come second in the event, I was so happy and all my efforts paid off.

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【答案】

Twenty years ago, as a middle school student I attended a debate competition. As I was not well prepared and I got nervous and feared, I lost the competition. Soon another debate competition was held. I prepared for every detail, conquered myself and got the second place. From this experience I know efforts will pay off sooner or later.

【分析】

这是一篇概要写作。

【详解】

写作步骤

1）细读原文。首先要仔细阅读短文，掌握文章主旨和结构，明确各段的大意。文章主要讲述了二

十年前，作者作为一名中学生参加了一次辩论赛。由于作者没有准备好，作者紧张和害怕，最后输了比赛。不久，另一场辩论赛举行了。作者准备好了每一个细节，战胜了自己，获得了第二名。从这次经历中，作者知道努力迟早会有回报的。

2）弄清要求。新高考的概要写作是写全文概要，不是写某一部分的概要，或者就某些问题写出要点。

3）列出原文要点。分析原文的内容和结构，将内容分项扼要表述并注意在结构上的顺序。在此基础上选出与文章主题密切相关的部分。

4）在写作时要特别注意下面几点：

（1）概要应包括原文中的主要事实，略去不必要的细节。

（2）安排好篇幅的比例，概要应同原文保持协调，即用较多的文字写重要内容，用较少的文字写次要内容。

（3）注意要点之间的衔接，要用适当的关联词语贯通全文，切忌只简单地写出一些互不相干的句子，但也不要每两句之间都加关联词语，以免显得生硬。

（4）不排斥用原文的某些词句，但不要照搬原文的句子，如果不能完全用自己的话语表达，至少对原文句子做一些同义词替换，如果结构上也能有一些转换会更好。

（5）计算词数，看是否符合规定的词数要求。

【点睛】

本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：attend；a debate competition；well prepared；conquer；effort；pay off；sooner or later等高级词汇；As I was not well prepared and I got nervous and feared, I lost the competition.运用了原因状语从句；等高级句式。