初中英语英语书面表达汇编常见题型及答题技巧及练习题(含答案)

一、中考英语书面表达汇编

1．（·北京中考模拟）某英文网站正在开展以“我最喜欢的中华传统节日”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你最喜欢的传统节日是什么，节日里你通常都做什么，以及你为什么喜欢这个节日。

提示词语:festival，get together, enjoy，moon cakes，harvest time 提示问题: What's your favorite traditional festival? What do you usually do during the festival? Why do you like it?

There are many traditional festivals in

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【答案】There are many traditional festivals in China. My favourite one is Mid-autumn Festival and it usually comes on August 15 of the lunar year.

On the festival we usually go back home from other cities or places and have a big dinner with the whole family. After dinner, we often eat moon cakes, watch the full moon and talk with each other happily.

I like Mid-autumn Festival best not only because I like the delicious moon cakes but also because it’s a family get-together time and I really enjoy the love among the family members. 【解析】

这是一篇话题作文，根据话题要求来介绍一下中国的传统节日。根据所提供的提示词语可知，要求介绍中国的传统节日：中秋节。可以从你最喜欢的传统节日是中秋节，节日里你通常都做什么，以及你为什么喜欢中秋节三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意在给报社的投稿中必须包含提示词语中的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语把所给的提示问题回答清楚就行。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。 【高分句型一】

On the festival we usually go back home from other cities or places and have a big dinner with the whole family. 在节日里，我们会从不同的地方回家，和全家团聚，一起吃大餐。由and连接的并列句。 【高分句型二】

I like Mid-autumn Festival best not only because I like the delicious moon cakes but also because it’s a family get-together time and I really enjoy the love among the family members. 我最喜欢中秋节，不仅因为我喜欢美味的月饼，而且因为它是一个家庭聚会时间，我真的很享受家庭成员之间的爱。句子中运用了not only…… but also……，还有because引导的原因状语从句。

2．（·辽宁初三） 近年来“汉语热”在全球各地悄然兴起，你的笔友 Peter在如何学好汉语方面急需你的帮助，快来帮帮他吧！ Dear Peter,

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Yours, Li Hua

【答案】例文

Here are some ways to learn Chinese. You could watch Chinese movies. You could also write to me in Chinese. It's good to find a partner to practice Chinese with. These will be helpful. 【解析】 【详解】

这是一篇书信，书信的内容为方法策略，给外国笔友推荐一些学习汉语的方法。因此在信件中，写出一些你认为有效的学习方法即可，写作过程中注意语法、拼写正确。 【高分句型】

It's good to find a partner to practice Chinese with.找一个同伴一起练习汉语很不错。句子为It is+形容词+to do sth.结构，句中it为形式主语，真正的主语为不定式短语。

3．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达

你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校的选择。请你以“A boarding school or a day school”为题。写一篇短文，内容须包括：读寄宿学校的利和弊；读走读学校的利和弊；你的选择和理由（不得与上述两点内容重复）。

注意：1. 词数;100词左右（文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；

2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；

3. 文章必须包含提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥。 A hoarding school or a day school

We are going to graduate from our middle school, __________________________________ 【答案】

We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages. If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time computer games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us.

As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school. 【解析】 【分析】

整体分析：这是一篇给材料作文。可以分三段写。第一段要写总体交代你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校的选择。第二段要写详细叙述读寄宿学校的利弊；读走读学校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的选择和理由。 【详解】

写作之前要1.审清题目，看看有哪些要求？哪些时态？人称？2.确定文章类型，记叙文？说明文？议论文？看图？还是应用文？3.确定时态，单一还是混合。4.写下关键词、短语、句型。5.列出提纲和段落，并运用适当的句型和过渡词衔接。6.根据提纲和段落结构句型及关键词句完成文章。写完后反复阅读修改推敲润色，人称、时态、单复数一致等。运用自然过渡法和自然衔接法来是文章更为地道、通顺、纯正。用的短语、句型：both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、来增加了文章的亮点。 【点睛】

这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题，注意过渡性语言的使用。做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。

4．（·北京中考模拟）年2月20日，宣传部授予北京榜样优秀群体“时代楷模”称号。时代楷模充分体现“爱国、敬业、诚信、友善”的价值准则。

某网站正在开展以“向时代楷模学习”为主题的英语征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你该怎么做，以及这样做的意义。 提示词语：pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important

提示问题：● What should you do in your daily life? ● Why do you do so? As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models.

【答案】例文

As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warm-hearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful. 【解析】 【详解】

题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，具体写出怎样做以及这样做的意义。

例文点评：例文采用的是一段式，人称用的是第一人称复数形式，时态主要用的是一般现在时，描述具体怎么做时，描写细致，条理清晰。 高分亮点：

短语：protect the environment；pick up the rubbish；behave well；be kind to sb；more and more beautiful。

句型：By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful；we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。

5．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达

下面的图片描述了昨天下午发生在四年级三班教室里的情景。小林和小刚之间的对话，让你 想到了什么？请根据你对图片的理解，用英语写一篇 100 词左右的短文。

内容包括：1. 完整描述图片内容； 2. 简要阐述你的观点和看法。 写作要求：1. 可以根据图片信息，进行适当的发挥；

2. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 提示词： 手提电脑 laptop

【答案】Yesterday afternoon, Xiao Lin and Xiao Gang from Class 3 Grade 4 had a talk. They showed off the Children’s Day gift. Xiao Lin’s mom bought him a telephone and Xiao Gang’s dad bought a laptop for him. They were very proud. Other students envied them very much. But I think it is not proper to compare with each other. The main task of students is studying. So their

attention should be focused on study. Of course their parents can buy some gifts for the holiday, but I think the gift must be suitable for their children, such as books, school things, dictionaries and so on., which are good for them. Things like cell phones and laptops are of little use to primary school students, just distracting them. 【解析】 【详解】

这篇短文要求我们观察图片，将图片中发生的场景用英语表达出来，是一篇看图作文。首先学生们应仔细观察图片，了解图片中发生的场景，弄清楚它主要想传达的意思，然后用英语将这些内容表达出来。审题可知，这篇短文的内容应主要包括两个部分：首先要描述图片中发生的事情；其次对该事情阐述自己的观点和看法。短文应主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时，第三人称来叙述，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意：首先短文内容应符合图片表达的意思，不能会错意，写偏、写错；可以根据图片信息适当发挥，使文章更加充实、完整。其次要注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。用从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。句式结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句或复合句结构。为提升作文水平，应注意应用高级词汇和复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的衔接成分，使文意连贯、自然。 【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求以及图片信息，介绍了图片中发生的事情，并对这件事发表了自己的看法。短文有以下几个优点：首先短文内容符合题目要求，作者通过观察图片，正确了解了图片传达的信息，确定了文章的中心。文章内容完整、充实，叙述清晰、有层次。作者观点明确，理由充分。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时和一般现在时、第三人称来叙述，正确使用了谓语动词的形式，注意了过去式，尤其是不规则动词过去式的变化，语法规范，用词准确。最后短文中句式结构文章，符合英语的表达习惯，简单句、并列句、复合句交替应用，文章富有节奏的变化。短文中还使用了丰富的句型，如Xiao Lin’s mom bought him a telephone and Xiao Gang’s dad bought a laptop for him.、

But I think it is not proper to compare with each other.、Of course their parents can buy some gifts for the holiday, but I think the gift must be suitable for their children, such as books, school things, dictionaries and so on., which are good for them.、Things like cell phones and laptops are of little use to primary school students, just distracting them.等。

6．（·黑龙江中考模拟）（A）话题作文：现在视力不好的人越来越多，有的孩子很小的时候就戴上了眼镜。从小保护好眼睛很重要。六月六日是“全国爱眼日”。请你结合实际生活写一篇题目为“It’s important to protect our eyes”的英文稿。 内容：（1）眼睛的重要性；

（2）保护眼睛的措施：①不要长时间读书看报； ②不要在太强或太弱的光线下看书； ③坚持做眼保健操。

【答案】It’s important to protect our eyes

The eyes are the window of our mind. We use our eyes to see everything around us. Without eyes, nothing is left beside you but darkness.

How to protect our eyes? It’s not right to keep your eyes working for a long time. You’d better not read in strong or poor light. Don’t read in bed or on a moving bus. Remember to keep your books away from your eyes for about a foot and do eye exercises every day. What’s more, a balanced diet is necessary.

Follow my advice and form a good habit. It’s time to say goodbye to thick glasses. 【解析】 【详解】

本文属于话题作文，阐述眼睛的重要性以及如何保护眼睛。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如the window of our mind, had better do, remember to do, keep away from, what’s more, follow one’s advice, it’s time to do以及it is adj to do。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。 【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

7．（·山东中考模拟）每一次变化都伴随着我们的成长，作为初中生的你，你感觉自已比起小时候有了哪些变化?请写一篇文章描述一下你认为最明显的变化。 要点包括: 1. 变化是什么? 2. 变化是如何发生的? 3. 变化后有什么感受?

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is falling in love with rending.

When I was a child, I didn’t enjoy reading books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me a lot of books. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like I am talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time. Books are my friends. They will continue to benefit me even more. 【解析】 【分析】

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我比起小时候有了哪些变化。 【详解】

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：When I was……，my mother always read……，Gradually I began to……，Books are……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我最大的个人变化是喜欢上读书，接下来介绍我小时候不喜欢读书，最后指出现在书籍是我的朋友。此处fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, begin to do sth, love doing sth, feel like, talk with, continue to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

8．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达

越来越多的人认识到阅读对人一生发展的重要性，作为一名中学生，你应该怎么做？请根据下列表格中所给要点，写一篇英语短文。

读书好 好读书 读好书 要点 书籍是良师益友；获取知识带来快乐...... 让读书成为日常行为...... 选择对自己有益的书；一本好书改变人的一生...... 要求：

1．文中必须包含表格中的所有要点，并适当发挥；

2．条理淸晰，字迹工整。词数大约90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3．文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。

Nowadays, reading is becoming more and more popular among us. ____________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Nowadays，reading is becoming more and more popular among us．People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world．But I don't think so．In my opinion，to read books is more valuable than anything else．The old saying” To open a book is

always helpful” clearly tells us how good it is to read a book．Books are our friends．They introduce us different kinds of knowledge．They lead us down the road to success．Books are our teachers．They teach us troth，science，literature，and philosophy of life．Besides，they increase our knowledge，enlarge our experience，strengthen our character and do many other things which we can not do without them．Books tell us what is good and what is evil．And only books can tell the good from the bad．Therefore to read more books is the best policy for our young students．

As a middle school student．I think we should read more books．Reading is good for our physical and mental health．

Let's be active readers and enjoy reading． 【解析】 【详解】

越来越多的人认识到阅读对人一生发展的重要性，作为一名中学生，你应该怎么做？请根据下列表格中所给要点，写一篇英语短文。用一般现在时来写。根据汉语提示，灵活采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。 【点睛】

文章从读书好；好读书；读好书，分别介绍了读书的重要性，文中要到了一些好的句型：People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world．；They introduce us different kinds of knowledge；They lead us down the road to success给文中增色不少。

9．（·上海市澧溪中学初三期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Yesterday once more”.（以“昨日重现”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

当昨日重现之时，在脑海里的都是回忆。记忆中有没有让你留下深刻印象的人、事或物，对你现在的生活造成了影响。请选取一个方面，结合自身经历，谈谈你当时的经历以及现在的感受。（注意：段文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） The following is for reference only（以下表达仅供参考）

used to be.../make sb do sth/in my heart/have a deep influence/remind sb of sth 【答案】例文

Yesterday once more

It goes without saying that our life is full of a variety of memories. Among all the persons I have met, the most unforgettable person is my father.

I used to be such a shy and silent girl that I couldn’t say any words in public. Whenever teachers asked me to answer questions, my heart would beat again and again and say nothing but to look down. Once, I tried talking with my father frightenedly. He listened to me all the time with bright smile and encouraged me to be brave. He told me, “ you don’t have to be perfect but when you do your best, you make your parent proud.” With the support of my father, I gained so much encouragement that I determined to be a more confident person.

In one word, Father’s love like water, deep and soft, which makes great differences in my life. 【解析】 【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应注意选取一个给你留下深刻印象的人、事或物，对你现在的生活造成了影响。结合自身经历，谈谈你当时的经历以及现在的感受。

2.例文点评：例文采用三段式：用第一人称来叙述故事内容：时态采用一般过去式为主，叙述过去的经历，叙述完整清晰。 3.高分亮点：

短语：full of；in public；again and again；all the time；encourage sb to do sth；do one’s best；with the support of。

句型：such…that…；so…that…引导的结果状语从句；whenever…引导的从句；used to do。

10．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达

根据所给图画和文字提示，用英语写一篇约80词的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容。

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——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— 【答案】After school,Bob ,Mike and Sarah were going home happily.On the way home,they saw a boy fell down on the ground.They asked him,they knew he was a student ,too.He found it was very dirty here.He rode a bike to come here,he wanted to clean it.After they heard this,they helped the boy stand up.They let him sit on the seat.Then they helped him clean the ground.After they saw it was very clean,they all very happy. 【解析】 【详解】

这是一篇看图作文。考生首先要弄清图画内容，把握情节线索，根据图画在脑海中串联出完整的故事，注意图画中的细节。然后运用所学的词语，尽量运用熟悉的句型，做适当展开、联想，完整地表达出画面的意思。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句

应该符合英语的表达习惯；切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅，连贯。注意书写的规范：大小写，标点符号等的正确运用；最后注意检查：单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，主谓一致等。

11．（·北京中考模拟）（题文）假如你是李华，本周六与好友相约去北京植物园。你的美国网友Fred正好也在北京，你邀他同去。请你向他发出邀请，告诉他去哪儿，做什么以及你的建议。

提示词语：Beijing Botanical Garden, have a picnic 提示问题：When and where are you going this Saturday? What will you do there?

·

What do you advise him to do?

【答案】I’m writing to invite you to join us this Saturday. This Saturday, I’m going to Beijing Botanical Garden with my friends. We’ll meet at our school gate at seven in the morning. Then we are going there by bike. We’ll enjoy the colorful flowers and plants there. We are going to have a picnic in the open air. If you like to join us, prepare some food to take with you. Don’t forget to take a bottle of water. I hope you can come and we’ll come back at five in the afternoon. I’m looking forward to your early reply.

【解析】试题分析：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。本题根据提示内容应该用一般现在时，邀请对方并给出建议，需使用表达邀请和用于提建议的相关短语和句式，注意长短搭配，并在行文中增加细节和过渡，使文章读起来比较流畅。动笔前，一定要认真分析提示要点，理解要点要表达的含义。平时除了加强词汇积累和写作练习以外，还应该适当背诵一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如join us，this Saturday，be going to，Beijing Botanical Garden，in the morning，by bike，have a picnic，in the open air，like to do，forget to do，a bottle of water，come back，in the afternoon，look forward to等。而If you like to join us, prepare some food to take with you. / I hope you can come and we’ll come back at five in the afternoon.等多种从句和be going to结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是本文的最大亮点。

12．（·江苏中考模拟）假如你叫Sandy，你收到了你的英文笔友Lucy的来信。请你用英文给她写一封回信，针对她的问题，谈谈你的看法，并给出可行的建议。

Dear Sandy,

I am very glad to enter my school. I enjoy the life here except for the school lunch. I prefer hamburgers,ice creams and potato chips,but we are not allowed to order them according to the school rules. I usually have little for lunch and I often feel tired and can't follow the teachers in the afternoon classes. What should I do? Do you have any good ideas? Please write to me as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Lucy

注意事项:1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数; 2.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear Lucy,

I am glad to receive your letter. Yours, Sandy

【答案】Dear Lucy,

I am glad to receive your letter. I can understand your feeling and I'm worried about your health and your study. Here are some suggestions for you.

First, hamburgers, ice creams and potato chips are bad for your health, so you had better give up the thought that you want to eat them at school. Second, try to eat as much school lunch as possible in order to have enough energy. Try your best and everything will be all right soon. Finally, if there is really something wrong with the school lunch, you can talk to your teachers and help improve it. It's not only for yourself, but also for the whole school. Good luck. Yours, Sandy

【解析】本文内容应包含题目中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

点睛：这封信使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如；be worried about；be bad fo as ··· as possible ;Try one’s best； in order to； not only··· but also···等；First；Second, Finally,等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。

13．（·北京中考模拟）我区正在全力创建全国文明城区。假如你是李华，你打算邀请你们班交换生Peter参加下周日学校组织的志愿活动。请用英语写一封邀请函，告诉他活动的

时间和地点，活动内容以及需要做什么准备。

提示词语： Muhu Park, pick up, water, put up posters, gloves, shoes 提示问题：When and where will you go? What will you do in this activity?

What do you advise Peter to prepare for this activity?

Dear Peter, How is it going?

I’m writing to invite you to take part in the volunteer activity. I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Li Hua Dear Peter, How is it going?

I’m writing to invite you to take part in the volunteer activity. I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Peter How is it going?

I’m writing to invite you to take part in the school’s activity to volunteer for a better environment. We’ll go to the park near our school at 9 o’clock on Sunday morning.

We’ll pick up rubbish and put up posters about protecting the environment. If you decide to join us you can make a poster and take it with you. And you’d better take gloves and a plastic bag with you.

I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours Li Hua 【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，属于应用文写作。本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；提示的问题就是写作的基本方向，写作要点为：1. 志愿者活动的时间和地点。2. 活动中做些什么。3. 建议彼得为这次活动做哪些准备。然后围绕要点适当发挥。结合材料内容，可知时态以一般将来时态为主。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习

惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

14．（·山东中考模拟）初中生活即将结束，学校英语俱乐部特邀你写一篇英语短文,给七年级新生的学习生活提几点建议。 内容要点如下：

1. 初中科目更多，好的学习方法很重要； 2. 锻炼身体，保持健康；

3. 参加社团活动，使学校生活丰富； 4. 多读书，多交朋友； 5. 补充一两点个人想法。 注意：

1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； 2. 词数：60－80；

3. 内容连贯，不要逐条翻译； 4. 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：method n. 方法 club n．社团 colorful adj.丰富的 Welcome to our school!

________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I will graduate from my school. Therefore I’d like to share something with you. Firstly,because of many subjects in middle school, it is important for you to have your own study methods. In order to be better at study, you must do more exercise to keep healthy. Secondly, you can join in some club activities to make school life more colorful in your spare time. In other words, please keep balance between school life and study. In addition, it is a good choice to make more friends and read more books. At last, if you have problems in school life, please talk with your teachers or parents. They are always there waiting for you. I hope you will have a wonderful school life. 【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，自己即将毕业，给七年级新生的学习生活提几点建议。结合所给的材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，以第一人称为主，要注意主谓一致，所写的句子要符合英语语法，用自己熟悉的单词和句式来写。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，开头两句很自然地过渡到正文上来。用了短语和句式，如：graduate from毕业于；share sth with sb和某人分享某事；wait for等候等，用来一些过渡词或短语，如：Firstly, Secondly,In other words, At last等，上下文衔接很自然。

15．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达

假定你叫John，最近从报纸上得知英国某公司将在你的家乡建一座工厂，请给该公司写封电子邮件。要点如下： 表示欢迎：有利于家乡发展等； 感到担忧：造成环境污染等；

希望了解有关环保措施及更多信息。 适当提出一点你的建议。 注意：1．词数80—100；

2．请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥以使行文连贯； 3．邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Sir or Madam,

_____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ Yours faithfully, John

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a middle school student. I have recently learned from the newspaper that you are going to build a factory here in my hometown. There is no doubt that it is good for the development of my hometown and it will provide us with more jobs. Most of us stand by the program. However, some of us are worried that the factory will make much noise and pollute the environment of the area. I would like to know whether you have any plans for the environment protection. Would you please offer us more information about it? I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, John 【解析】

这是一篇提纲作文。内容是针对英国某公司将在你的家乡建一座工厂这件事，写一封电子邮件，表达欢迎和你的担忧。注意电子邮件的格式，时态主要为一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文。要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性；文章必须涵盖所提供的各个提纲要点，不要遗漏。行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句。作文完成后，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏需要表达的要点和细节。 本文的写作要点：

1．表示欢迎：有利于家乡发展等； 2．感到担忧：造成环境污染等； 3．希望了解有关环保措施及更多信息； 最后，适当提出一点你的建议。

16．（·湖北中考模拟）书面表达

初中生即将结束，学校英语俱乐部特邀你写一篇英语短文，给七年级新生的学习生活提几点建议。 内容要点如下：1.初中科目更多，好的学习方法很重要；2.锻炼身体，保持健康；3.参加社团活动，使学校生活丰富；4.多读书，多交朋友；5.补充一两点个人想法。 注意:1.短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

2.不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。

3.语句连贯，词数80词左右。

参考词汇：method n.方法 club. n 社团 colorful adj.丰富的 Welcome to our school!

【答案】Welcome to our school!

I will graduate from my school. Therefore I’d like to share something with you. Firstly,because of many subjects in middle school, it is important for you to have your own study methods. In order to be better at study, you must do more exercise to keep healthy. Secondly, you can join in some club activities to make school life more colorful in your spare time. In other words, please keep balance between school life and study. In addition, it is a good choice to make more friends and read more books. At last, if you have problems in school life, please talk with your teachers or parents. They are always there waiting for you. I hope you will have a wonderful school life. 【解析】

本文是一篇给材料作文。要求是给七年级新生的学习生活提几点建议，所以人称主要用第二人称，时态用一般现在时。在写作过程中，首先要将所提供给的信息要点用英语正确的表达出来，要涵盖所提到的所有要点，同时注意理顺要点，防止漏写，可适当发挥。同时在写作的时候，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。要注意准确运用时态，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后检查所用时态、人称是否符合要求；检查段落是否完整，句子表达是否准确，语法、拼写、标点、移行、大小写等方面是否有误等。

17．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达

在英语课上，同学们就自己喜欢的旅游方式展开了讨论。请你根据下表内容，用英语写一篇短文，汇报讨论结果，并谈谈自己的想法。

◆有导游，不会迷路； 团队旅游 ◆不必自己找食宿 ◆结识朋友，互相帮助 ◆自由安排时间； 个人旅游 ◆选择自己喜欢的旅游景点； ◆学会照顾自己 你的想法 …… 注意事项：

1．文章必须包括表中全部内容，可适当增加细节； 2．想法至少在两句以上；

3．词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：

团队旅游travel with a group 个人旅游travel alone

Recently, we have discussed the ways to go travelling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Recently, we have discussed the ways to go travelling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．With a guide's help, they won't get lost and they don't need to look for hotels or restaurants by themselves．Besides, they can make friends and help each other while travelling．

However, other students prefer to travel alone． That's because they can arrange their time freely and choose to visit their favourite sights．What's more, it's a chance for them to learn to look after themselves．

For me, I'd like to travel alone．I want to spend enough time visiting the places I like． In this way, I can enjoy my vacation better．

【解析】这是一篇图表，要求谈谈自己对不同的旅游方式的看法。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

18．（·四川中考模拟）书面表达

目前，学生考试作弊现象严重，请围绕以下要点谈谈其中原因以及个人建议。 原因：1.考试太滥

2.自身勤奋不够

3.把大量时间用在上网和玩游戏上 4.为了骗取家长和老师高兴

看法与建议：1.作弊有害； 2.要做人诚实，学习发奋； 3.学校应减少考试。 要求：1.字数 80-100； 2.围绕要点可适当发挥； 3.文章开头已给出，不计入总字数。 ________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit-cheating in examinations.

There are three main reasons. First, schools have given students too many exams, some of which are too difficult. Second, some students are not hard-working and they don't work hard at their lessons. Third, they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet. So they haven't enough time to prepare for the exams. Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.

In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study. We students should be honest and diligent, and only in this way can we improve our study and make progress. Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves. 【解析】写作分析：

本文需要就考试作弊这一主题展开讨论。具体需要围绕考试作弊的原因展开写作，原因已经给出来了，有以下几点：1.考试太滥 2.自身勤奋不够 3.把大量时间用在上网和玩游戏上 4.为了骗取家长和老师高兴。写完原因后还要提出自己的看法和建议，具体内容也已给出：1.作弊有害；2.要做人诚实，学习发奋；3.学校应减少考试。写作内容上难度不大，需要把更多精力放在语言的准确性和文章的连贯性上面。 写作亮点：

第一段总起描述了现在存在的作弊现象，用到了一些较好的短语，如picked up a bad habit（养成了一个坏习惯）。第二段对原因进行了阐述，借助了first，second，third等词使得原因的陈述连贯起来。一些短语运用准确，如waste a lot of time playing games（浪费时间在玩游戏上），prepare for the exams（准备考试）。最后一段阐明了自己的看法（In my opinion），句式上面有创新，用到了一处倒装句（only in this way can we improve our study and make progress），强调了不能作弊，只有以诚实和勤奋的方式我们才能进步。总体来说文章写作较为流畅，有许多亮点。

19．（·山东中考模拟）写作

现在，戴眼镜的学生越来越多，为此，国家把每年 6 月 6 日定为爱眼日。请你结合自己的体会，就如何爱护眼睛，给校报英语栏目写一篇短文。 提示：

1．吃有益于眼睛的食物，如胡萝卜、鸡蛋等； 2．多做眼保健操，长时间用眼后可看看远方； 3．养成良好的用眼习惯，如：不躺着玩手机或看书等。 要求：

1．根据内容，可适当发挥； 2．文中不能出现真实的人名和校名；

3．词数90左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）

Nowadays, more and more students are getting near-sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6th every year. ____________________________________________

【答案】Nowadays, more and more students are getting near-sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6th every year. As we all know, eyes are the windows to the soul. We should try our best to protect them. Here are some suggestions for good eye health.

First, eat some foods that are good for eyes, such as carrots and eggs. Second, do more eye exercises to make them relax. Also, it's helpful to look far away from time to time after studying long. Finally, make sure to have a good habit. Don't read books or use a cell phone in bed. In a word, eyes are so important that all of us should do what we can to keep them healthy. 【解析】 【详解】

这是一篇材料作文，写作前要认真阅读前面的提示，确定文章的中心。写作的主题就是如何爱护眼睛。我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。结合材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，第一人称，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。用到的词组或短语有：try one’s best to do尽力做某事，be good for对……有益，such as例如, from time to time不时地，It’s + adj. to do sth.做某事怎么样；make sure to do sth.务必做某事； keep healthy保持健康。

20．（·靖江市靖城中学中考模拟）九年寒窗苦，六月备考忙。对于即将到来的中考，同学们既有期盼也有压力。为了让同学们学得开心，学有信心，我校英文报刊将开展“How to Face Senior High School Entrance Examination”的征文比赛，请你根据提示内容，用英语简要描述并适当表达自己的观点。内容要点如下表： 现状概述 由于课业繁重，学生压力较大。 更注重学生的语言能力，学生难得高分，因此有些学生可能灰心。 我们不仅要勤奋努力，更要改进学习方法。 应该认真计划好时间，以便在学业和爱好间取得平衡。 ……（1-2点，做适当发挥） 同学建议 你的建议 注意事项：1. 征文须包含表格中所有要点。要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 2. 词数100左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

How to Face Senior High School Entrance Examination

The Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming. Are you ready for it? Although we have dreams, we may feel worried from time to

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________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】How to Face Senior High School Entrance Examination

The Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming. Are you ready for it? Although we have dreams, we may feel worried from time to time.

Recently, because of the heavy schoolwork, many students are stressed. Moreover, more attention is paid to students’ language ability, so it is difficult for students to get high marks. As a result, some students are likely to lose heart.

As to the problems, my classmates offer the following suggestions. First, we should not only work hard but also improve our learning methods. Second, we should plan our time carefully so that we can achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies.

In my opinion, we should develop a healthy body by eating healthily and exercising more. Furthermore, we’d better share the worries with our teachers and friends. 【解析】 【分析】

这是一篇给材料作文，以“How to Face Senior High School Entrance Examination”为题，用英语简要描述如何面对中考，并适当表达自己的观点。 【详解】

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：many students are…...，so it is difficult for students to……，we should……，we’d better……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我们面对中考会感到担心，接下来介绍学生的现状以及同学们给出的建议，最后表达我的观点。此处from time to time, pay attention to, lose heart, so that, in one’s opinion, share..with…等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。