(一)
I have noticed that much of the fiction and nonfiction works publishing in Teen Magazine have a happy ending．While these are pleasantly to read，one has to ask how it is possible that there is so much optimism．I’m all for positive thinking，and readers should also be exposed by the darker side of life．Why publish a story about someone whose experiences a tragedy and gets nothing in return? After all，that’s life．
Not every story have a happy ending．I think this would benefit from Teen Magazine’s readers to see both kinds：happy and real
(二)
When I was a senior in a high school，I had a teacher calling Mrs Smith．She taught English and she has an important effect on me．She was fill of love for us．She had our class to make posters and hang it around the school．She taught us that one kindly act can go long way．Well，Mrs Smith passed away just a couple of year ago after a long battle with the breast cancer．I’ll never forget how a wonderful and sweet lady she was．I am truly blessed to have been known her．I am going to be a teacher like her and I’ll always remember her kindness．
(三)
China is an ancient civilization with cultures dating hack more than 4000 year．Basic elements for the modern world such as paper，gunpowder，paper money，or compasses originated in China．Today，China is again at the forefront of world，with Chinese goods reach all parts of the world．The Chinese culture have also fascinated many people．In the Shaolin Monasteries，the Great Wall of China or the Forbidden City of Beijing，China has its unique arts and architectures that what draw thousands of visitors every year．The Chinese food is equal popular around the world and it is loved by much non-Chinese．But in China，the food can found in great varieties and is different in region to region．So join us and experience all these．
(四)
At first I was not quite willing to sit down and watched the 90-minute football match．Usually I just checked the results because I thought that was dull to watch a game in that players kicked a ball to each other．Therefore，my father loves football During the World Cup in 2006，my dad stays up late just to watch his favourite sport．Seeing him strong interest in this game of 22 men run after a ball，I decided to sit down to watch the game，I found game exciting，and my dad explained for the rules．We shared our joy．Football is not too badly as long as I watch it with my dad!
(五)
When Jack bowed to someone，he always did it much too quickly．They needn’t to wait any longer after he finished nodding his head．So he was bland for no manner．Then a warm-hearted man teaches him，“When you bow to somebody next time，you can count the January，February，March，until December．Then you can lift your body．Thus，the ceremony will almost perfect”．The next day，he met his uncle，but be did as the man told him to．The bow was too long that it made his uncle escape soon with a surprising look．When Jack looked down，he found his uncle gone．So he asked a passer-by，“In which month did she go away?”
(六)
In order to be successful，you should first of all never give up whatever happen．If you fail，you should never lose heart．In the contrary，you must build up your confidence or work even harder．You should always remember that working hard was the key to success，Besides，you should pay a great attention to your working methods．That is necessary for you to take every chance improve them．Finally，you should try to get along well with your co-workers，cared for each other and helping each other．If you follow these rule，you will certain achieve great success in the future．
答案与解析部分
(一)
I have noticed that much of the fiction and nonfiction works publishing in Teen many published
Magazine have a happy ending．While these are pleasantly to read，one has to ask pleasant
how it is possible that there is so much optimism．I’m all for positive thinking，and
but
readers should also be exposed by the darker side of life．Why ∧ publish a story about
to not
someone whose experiences a tragedy and gets nothing in return? After all，that’s life．
who/that
Not every story have a happy ending．I think this would benefit Teen has it Magazine’s readers to see both kinds：happy and real.
答案解析：
第一处：works指“作品”时为可数名词，应该用many而不是much修饰；
第二处：publishing in Teen Magazine作为works的定语，跟所修饰的名词为被动关系，该用过去分 词；
第三处：做表语应该用形容词而不是副词，把pleasantly改为pleasant. 第四处：and的上下文是转折而不是并列关系，把and改为but. 第五处：be exposed to 为固定搭配，意为“遭受,暴露于……”。
第六处：Why not...?是表示提建议的固定句型，所以在why后加上not.
第七处：在这个定语从句someone whose experiences a tragedy and gets nothing in return?中，
需要关系代词而不是whose充当从句的主语，把whose改为who/ that. 第八处：every story为单数名词，谓语应该用单数，把have改为has.
第九处：在本句中，it为形式宾语，真正的宾语为后面的不定式，this不能做形式宾语，改为it.
第十处：benefit做动词意为“有益于, 得益”；benefit from意为“从……受益”，去掉from.
(二)
When I was a senior in a high school，I had a teacher calling Mrs Smith．She called taught English and she has an important effect on me．She was fill of love for us．She had full
had our class make posters and hang it around the school．She taught us that one
them
kindly act can go ∧ long way．Well，Mrs Smith passed away just a couple of year ago
kind a years after a long battle with the breast cancer．I’ll never forget how a wonderful and sweet
what lady she was．I am truly blessed to have
known her．I am going to be a teacher
like her and I’ll always remember her kindness．
答案解析：
第一处：calling Mrs Smith做teacher的定语，和被修饰的名词是被动关系，用过去分词；
第二处：本文讲述的过去的事情，应该用过去式 第三处：fill为动词；be full of为固定搭配；
第四处：本句的结构为have sb do sth（让……做……），应该省略to. 第五处：指代前面posters用复数代词them;
第六处：修饰名词act应该用形容词kind而不是副词; 第七处：a long way一段很长的路程，加上a;
第八处：a couple of修饰复数名词，years应该改为复数。
第九处：forget所带宾语从句中的表语部分用what, how的后面应该紧跟形容词或副词。
第十处：此处应该是“主动”了解她，故应该用to do的主动完成形式to have known.
(三)
China is an ancient civilization with cultures dating hack more than 4000 year． years
Basic elements for the modern world such as paper，gunpowder，paper money， or and compasses originated in China．Today，China is again at the forefront of ∧ world，with
the Chinese goods reach all parts of the world．The Chinese culture have also fascinated reaching has
many people．In the Shaolin Monasteries，the Great Wall of China or the Forbidden City of Beijing，China has its unique arts and architectures that
draw thousands
of visitors every year．The Chinese food is equal popular around the world and it is
equally
loved by much non-Chinese．But in China，the food can ∧ found in great varieties and is
many be
different in region to region．So join us and experience all these． from
答案解析：
第一处：4000年应该用year的复试形式years，因为此处不是做主语表一段时间。 第二处：“四大发明”之间是并列关系而不是选择关系，把or改为and.
第三处：此处world指前文出现过的the modern world，第二次出现该加the， 第四处：在本句中，with为介词，Chinese goods是介词的宾语，作为介词宾语的补语应该用非谓语形
式而不是谓语形式。 第五处：“The Chinese culture”是单数概念，谓语形式用单数has。 第六处：关系代词that在本句中充当定语从句的主语，不能再用what充当从句的主语，是为重复。
第七处：此处修饰be popular的 应为副词equally, 因为形容词修饰名词代词，副词修饰动词、副词 等。
第八处：non-Chinese指“非中国人”，是可数名词，表示复数,用many限定。 第九处：本句的主语为the food，是“被发现”，在句中作谓语，用被动语态的谓语结构can be done.
第十处：from region to region ”是“从一个地区到另一个地区”的意思。
(四)
At first I was not quite willing to sit down and watched the 90-minute football watch
match．Usually I just checked the results because I thought that was dull to watch a
it game in that players kicked a ball to each other．Therefore，my father loves football which However
During the World Cup in 2006，my dad stays up late just to watch his favourite stayed
sport．Seeing him strong interest in this game of 22 men run after a ball，I decided to
running sit down to watch the game，I found ∧ game exciting，and my dad explained
the
the
rules．We shared our joy．Football is not too badly as long as I watch it with my dad!
bad 答案解析：
第一处：and连接并列的不定式结构，应用动词原形。 第二处：it在thought后面的宾语从句中作形式主语。 第三处：in which构成介词加关系代词型的定语从句。
第四处：however表示转折，放在句首、句中或句末，通常用逗号与句子其他成分隔开。 第五处：本文主体时态是一般过去时。 第六处：his修饰后面的名词interest。
第七处：running after a ball是现在分词短语修饰men。 第八处：found后加the，the game特指前面的足球运动。 第九处：explain为及物动词，for应删除。 第十处：形容词修饰名词。
(五)
When Jack bowed to someone，he always did it much too quickly．They needn’t
wait any longer after he finished nodding his head．So he was bland for no manner． manners
Then a warm-hearted man teaches him，“When you bow to somebody next time， taught you can count
January，February，March，until December．Then you can lift your
body．
Thus，the ceremony will ∧ almost perfect”．The next day，he met his uncle， be
but be did as the man told him to．The bow was too long that it made his uncle and so
escape soon with a surprising look．When Jack looked down，he found his uncle surprised up gone．So he asked a passer-by，“In which month did she go away?” he
答案解析：
第一处：此处用了needn’t，表明用作情态动词，情态动词后接动词原形，去掉to. 第二处：manner意为“态度、礼貌”是用复数形式。 第三处：本文讲述的是过去发生的事情，老师是“过去”教他，用过去的动词谓语，teach改为taught.
第四处：月份的前面不需要定冠词，去掉the.
第五处：引号中的话为直接引语，will为助动词，perfect为形容词，需要补充be动词，构成将来时的
“主系表”结构。 第六处：“...he met his uncle”和“he did as...”两个动作之间是承接关系而不是转折关系，用
and不用but.
第七处：本句的句子结构为“so...that...”句型结构，把too改为so. 第八处：从上文看，应该是带着一副“感到惊奇”的表情，用surprised. 第九处：结合上文逻辑，Jack是低着头的，他只有“looked up”，才发现情况。 第十处：根据上文，离开的是uncle，用he指代。
(六) In order to be successful，you should first of all never give up whatever happen． happens
If you fail，you should never lose heart．In the contrary，you must build up your On
confidence or work even harder．You should always remember that working hard was and is the key to success，Besides，you should pay
great attention to your working
methods． That is necessary for you to take every chance ∧ improve them．Finally，you should try
It to to get along well with your co-workers， cared for each other and helping each other． caring
If you follow these rule，you will certain achieve great success in the future． rules certainly
答案解析：
第一处：在give up所带宾语从句中，whatever是从句主语，谓语应该用“三单”形式，happens.
第二处：On the contrary为固定搭配。 第三处：“build up your confidence”和“work even harder”之间是承接关系，用and代替or.
第四处：本文所述道理为一般道理，用现在时态，把was改为is. 第五处：pay attention to为固定短语，不含有不定代词a. 第六处：本句的真正主语为不定式短语，只能用it而不是that来做形式主语，把that改为it.
第七处：take every chance的目的是“improve them”，插入to做目的状语。
第八处：本句已有谓语should try，那么care只能做伴随状语，对句子的主语而言是“主动”关爱彼
此，用现在分词形式。
第九处：上文列举几条规则，则此处rule应用复数形式rules.
第十处：谓语部分为will achieve，修饰谓语的词应为副词，故用certainly代替certain.
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