九年级英语作文训练（Unit 1）
命题人：左红 审题人：陈晓辉 2013-8
作文题目：假设你是一名英语成绩优秀的初三学生，请你写一篇短文，简要总结
自己近几年学习英语的成功做法。
要求： 1. 题目自拟。
2. 合理安排内容，尽量介绍英语学习各个方面的做法，避免只介绍某一个方面的经验做法。
3. 语言通顺、语法准确。
作文分析:
这是一篇给定话题的自命题作文，要求以成绩优异生的身份介绍学习英语的成功做法和经验。
写作的重点要放在学习方法的介绍上。首先，可以介绍自己的英语学习情况，再导入到方法的介绍说明上。其次，由于介绍的内容包括多方面的内容，所以要注意写作的条理要清楚。要做到条理清楚，就需要恰到使用表示顺序或承接的词或词组。
写作指导：
1、 对于写作而言，丰富的词汇储备十分重要。关于这个话题常见的词汇和短语
有：
memorize，pronunciation, read aloud, make mistakes in grammar/ spelling, take notes， practice speaking， by asking the teacher for help/surfing the internet/getting an English tutor， have a problem， learn by heart„ 2. 可能用到的精彩句子：
A．原汁原味（课本重点结构和句型）
1. I learn English by reading aloud. 我通过大声朗读学英语。
2. What about reading aloud to practice pronunciation? 大声朗读练习发音怎么
样？
3. She added that having conversations with friends was not helpful at all. 她补
充说，和朋友交谈一点帮助都没有。
4. It is too hard to understand the voice . 理解那些话太难了。
5. He’s been learning English for six years. 他学习英语已经有六年了。
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6. First of all, it wasn’t easy for me to understand the teacher when she talked to
the class. 首先是老师给全班讲课时我不容易听懂。
7. I think that doing lots of listening practice is one of the secrets of becoming a
good language learner. 我认为进行大量的多听力训练是成为一个优秀语言学习者的秘诀之一。
B． 精彩例句拓展
1. As a good learner，we should have good habits and ways in learning
2. It is not difficult for you to learn English well if you spend time and energy on
it. 只要你花时间下功夫，学好英语并不难。
3. It is wise of you to take English seriously. 你能认真对待英语，这是明智的。 4. I always make mistakes in grammar. 我常常在语法方面犯错。
5. I have trouble reading English magazines. 我读英文杂志有些困难。 6. Why not listen and read after the tape ？为什么不听录音跟读呢？ 7. You’d better take notes in class. 你最好上课记笔记。
8. I not only learn lots of words and phrases，but also learn the skills of speaking. 9. The more we speak, the fewer mistakes we make.
10. A saying goes that practice makes perfect. When we learn English, we should
practice speaking every day in order to learn it better.
11. English itself is not difficult, the most important for a student is to be
confident.
12. The best way is to use it all the time . If we can talk in English , think in
English we can learn it well .
13. When I have problems，I will try to solve them with the help of a dictionary
first.
14. Be confident and hardworking，you will do well in English. 15. Don’t be afraid to ask for help. 别怕请人帮忙。 16. I think everyone can learn it well if you try hard. 17. I hope all these will be helpful to us．
18. Only in this way can we learn English well.
3.由于本话题涉及的内容一般是日常学习生活，所以一般情况下选用一般现在时。如果涉及到发生在过去的事，则使用一般过去时。谈论本话题也常常用到现在进行时。一定注意要按照内容安排选择适当的时态。
从涉及的内容来看，无论是谈论自己的学习经验还是面临的问题，都需要逐一列举，为了使全文流畅、生动、层次清晰、条理清楚，在写作中，正确使用连接词，会使文章增色不少。常见的表示顺序或承接的连词或词组有：first of all（首先），second（第二），to begin with（首先；本来）， later on（后来）,，finally（最后；
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终于；决定性地），at last（最后；终于）等。
4.每个句子要简练，尽量避免语法错误。但句式也不可过于单调，要把平时学的知识用进去，在恰当的地方使用如定语从句、宾语从句、非谓语动词和比较等句型，特别是对关联词的使用，如“so that以便；所以”、“not„but ”“not only...but also”等，更能显示出你的英文功底，但要做到这些并非一日之功，要靠平时的不断训练和积累。
5.注意不同语言的表达习惯，也是写好英语作文的重要环节。不要用汉语的句式去硬套英语句子，尽量使用学过的句型。
写作范文：
How I study English I often hear some students say that English is too difficult to learn, and they can’t learn it well. But English is easy to me. I am good at it. I am very glad to say something about how I learn English. First, I think ①having interest in English is very important. Interest is the best teacher. In order to develop interest in English, I always ②listen and learn some English songs. When I sing these songs, I feel very confident that I can learn English well. Second, English is a foreign language，it’s not so easy to learn. In class, I listen to the teacher carefully, speak bravely, I am not afraid of making mistakes. After I listen to the tape, read aloud the new words many times and practice speaking again and again. I also have a good habit---ask questions. Whenever I have a question, I will ask my teacher for help and make it clear. Third, I often read English magazines. In this way, I can learn lots of new words and expressions. Reading helps me understand a lot of things. I think it an important way to learn a foreign language. Learning English takes time and energy. If you are hardworking and interested in it, you will do well in it. I hope every student can learn English well.
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教师点评 得分点 这是一篇非常优秀的学生习作。 ①内容完整，介绍时使用了first、second、third等副词使短文条理清晰，层次分明。 ②用词丰富，使用了多种句式，作文具有较强的可读性。 ③用词恰当，极少出现语言错误。对于初中学生来说，有些句型使用的非常精彩，如：I think it an important way to learn a foreign language和Learning English takes time and energy. 存在问题 短文中出现了简单错误。 ①此两处分别应为 have an interest in和develop an interest。 ② 此处应为listen to。 建议 ①可根据英语学习的具体情况介绍如何学习词汇、语法等内容。 ②如果是考试作文，字数最好控制在100—120左右。
My Ways of Learning English
English is the most widely used language in the world. As a student in the 21st century, learning a foreign language well is necessary. Unfortunately, a few of my classmates don’t learn English well, so they want to give up. Therefore，I think I should help them with their English. Here are my ways of learning English.
First of all, I usually learn English by listening to the tapes. Correct pronunciation is the most important thing for beginners. I listen to the tape carefully every evening and read every sentence after the tape to improve my pronunciation. In this way, my English sounds very nice now, and I am more confident in learning English.
Second, I think reading is another important way to learn English. I usually learn new words by reading English magazines. By reading, I not only learn a lot of words, but also get to know how to use them. Reading helps me to understand grammar better, it makes grammar more interesting.
As for speaking, I join the English cub to practice spoken English. I talk with different students and foreign teachers. In my opinion, the best way of learning English is talking in English as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes because everyone makes mistakes.
请你来点评一下本篇学生习作吧！ Advantages:
Disadvantages:
Your advice：
习作练习：
关于学习英语，有人认为最重要的是学好语法，有人认为最重要的是尽可能多地记住一些单词和词组。而你认为这两种观点都有片面性。
以How to learn English well？ 为题写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。 How
to
learn
English
well
？
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评分标准： 整体布局 书写（横评，竖直，字母书写饱满，到位） 是否缺失 勾抹（几处） 词数 易犯错误：动词时态语态；搭配准确；名词数，格。 经典美句（反复背诵以备后用）
写作范文：
One possible version:
How to Learn English Well？
Some people think that if we want to learn English well we must learn English grammar well first of all. Others believe we can't learn English well if we don’t memorize as many English words and phrases as possible.
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总分
In my opinion，grammar rules，new words and phrases are both very important， but they are not enough. Fox example，some of my classmates are quite good at grammar and have learned by heart a lot of English words and phrases，yet they can't express themselves in English when they meet foreign friends.
I think the best way to learn English well is to learn and use English all the time. Don't be afraid of making mistakes. We'd better do a lot of listening, speaking, reading and writing. If you can form the habit of thinking and writing in English all day, you are sure to grasp the spirit of English and will be able to read works in English within a short period of time.
Only in this way can we learn English well. So I think this is the best way.
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