作文范文之courage英语作文

courage英语作文

【篇一：英语作文】

1. how to win love

love is like a tree which is made of many branches, including welfare, respect, identify, of course selfish, etc. nevertheless, how to win love is a significant subject we have to confront, opinions vary.

to begin with, love is very selfish, and we devote a great deal of time to our lover or wife. to make them feels happy, we always chat, go shopping with her or him, because they are more important than others in our opinions, meanwhile only by doing this he or she can feel you actually love him or her. in additional , freedom is indispensable for couple in marriage. if we can not give enough space to the remaining half, maybe he or she suspects that you dont trust him or her. last but not least, when we married, we must bear responsibility for our spouse, our children and our family. we have to be convinced of a fact that has the courage to bear the responsibility is one of the embodiments of the love and family love.

only after we do these, can we win love. it is pale to utilize any language to describe love, and love is even beyond the life and death. everyone should cherish it and win it.

2. new technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives

of consumers

with the rapid development of network technology, the trend that more people are likely to purchase and sell commodities online is becoming

fashionable. compared with the traditional ways of shopping, new technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers, opinions vary.

as is well-known, before the occurring of electronic commerce, individuals have to go to the physical stores when they need to purchase merchandise.

nevertheless, people have the ability to buy everything what they want and they can pay for, and electronic commerce brings them convenience, meanwhile, they have more space to choose goods. in addition, the most change is not the

methods of shopping but the perception. previously, people tended to consider the price of commodities, therefore, after some time selects, they would give up

buying the goods they love. nonetheless, the quality of goods has been put the first place, and they dont only take the price into consideration.

in my personal sense, new technologies have deep influence on the lives of consumers, and it is no exaggeration to say that shopping online has been the

most popular ways of shopping, and it contributes the decline of the physical stores, whats more, it weakens the feelings of shopping in the physical stores as well as the happiness.

【篇二：英语作文例文点评88篇】

借鉴和模仿是提高写作的基石。先借来再转为自用是巧学者之法。内容可适用于读写任务正文部分。

--miss.q

英语作文例文点评88篇 （收集于网络）

【要求】

英语课上老师教给同学们一句英语格言“no pains, no gains” （不劳则不获），并让大家围绕如下三方面以这句格言为题写一篇短文。

人们在困难面前容易气馁，并产生不劳而获的想法。

“不劳则不获”这一格言能给予人鼓励。

学生要取得优异成绩离不开苦功夫，所谓成功的秘诀即是辛勤的劳动。

【范文】

no pains, no gains

people attempting a task may be discouraged in front of difficulties. they start with a great interest and passion. when they find that the task will take much more effort than they thought, their interest diminishes and their passion wanes. at that time, they are likely to have the idea of reaping a good harvest without much labor. the old saying “no pains, no gains” comes as a word of cheer to these discouraged persons. no task that is really worth doing can be done either easily or quickly. no mastery of any knowledge or skill can be gained without painstaking efforts.

s them succeed. in fact, their secret of success is no secret. it depends largely on their efforts. good grades only belong to hardworking students.

many thanks for the favor you did for me!

【评语】

该文紧紧围绕题目给出的三方面加以论述，层次清楚，语言流畅易懂。“interest diminishes and their passion wanes” 中词语搭配讲究，“reaping a good harvest without much labor” 用另一个习惯表达法点出了“no pains, no gains”的含义，同时又避免了重复。文章句式灵活，长短搭配得当，使文章朗朗上口，虽然是议论文，但却没有枯燥之感。

【要求】

根据下面的提示写一篇短文，内容须包括下面几个要点。

没有坚强的意志就不可能取得成功。

事业成功须非凡的干劲。

有些人害怕困难，则一事无成。

【范文】

where there is a will, there is a way

no man can win success without strong will. we hear some men have got good results, but hardly realize that the great men had been making more efforts before they achieved success.

success requires an unusual amount of energy to overcome difficulties. so it is important for us to have great resolution.

some men tend to be afraid of difficulties. if they meet with some difficulties, they will give in. so they get nothing eventually.

so lets make up our minds, stick to it and surely win success in our career.

focus on the most important things to do to help your organization be successful. dont focus on the easiest things.

【评语】

对这种提纲式作文，一定要囊括所给提纲中的全部内容，但又无须拘泥于提纲，更不能逐字逐句地“翻译”。对此应发挥自己的想像力和创造力，大胆地创作扩展。

【要求】

很多人都希望能在事业上有所成就，但不是所有人都能取得胜利。成功需要顽强的意志，锲而不舍的努力，勤奋学习的精神。请你以此为主要内容，准备一篇百字左右的简短发言。

【范文】

the way to success

everyone tries to achieve success in his/her career. but some finally attain their aims while others fail. why? some continue their cause to the end through long period of hard struggles, but others are easily disappointed and stop halfway.

strong will, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success. a man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit. he sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be. life is short and we have too much to do. without diligence no one can achieve anything.

i believe that where there is a will there is a way, and that success belongs to those who can make constant efforts.

dont be afraid of life. believe that life is worth living, and your belief will help create the fact.

【评语】

这是一篇议论文，作者首先提出问题，再提出自己观点：意志坚强、锲而不舍、勤奋，是成功的三大要素。作者在结尾，巧妙地运用了谚语“where there is a will there is a way”，使文章增色不少。

【要求】

坚强的意志(mans strong will)请以下面三句分别作为三段段首的主题句，写一篇以坚强的意志为题的文章。

strong will is universally regarded as a very praisable quality.

there have been many examples that success can be achieved by strong will.

it is not easy to cultivate a strong will.

【范文】

mans strong will

strong will is universally regarded as a very praisable quality. it is neither genius nor extraordinary ability that gives us power to deal with and overcome

whatever hardship that befalls. it is strong will that enables us to endure the trying situation and to attain our goals. strong will gives us light when we are in the dark, and encouragement when we are frustrated. with this meritorious quality, no enemy can overwhelm us, and no obstacles can stand in our way. as the saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way.

all pain helps to make us rise, how-ever much we may hate it at the time.

there have been many examples that success can be achieved by strong will. during the long march, the red army soldiers met with the greatest hardship men have ever experienced. they had nothing to eat but grass roots and barks of trees. it was their strong will that made them defeat the hardship. helen keller, a strong willed american blind woman, mastered the english language and became a well-known educator. such instances abound, and suffice it just to enumerate the two.

develop a high tolerance for ambiguity----youll be more satisfied.

it is not easy to cultivate a strong will. first of all, we must set up a firm faith in our cause, namely, the cause

of communism, and be ready to devote our lives to it. secondly, we must learn from strong-willed persons, especially, from revolutionary martyrs who fought for communism to the last drop of blood. finally, we should boldly go through trials and hardships to train our will so as to get rid of the weak points of our moral character.

【评语】

本文为议论文。首段的“neither?nor?”“it is strong will that?”，和“no enemy?no obstacles?”的运用，加强了文章的语气，突出了坚强意志的重要价值。段末的格言起到了画龙点睛的作用。第二段用了红军二万五千里长征和海伦?凯勒这两个例子，有力地证明了坚强的意志能使人获得成功这一主题。末段谈如何培养坚强的意志，层次清晰，观点正确，具有说服力。

【要求】

以“dont stop halfway”为题写一篇议论文。

论证具体 结构完整 字数100—150

【范文】

dont stop halfway

when a man is doing some work, he desires some benefit from it. in order to get this benefit, the must do the task to the end and completely finish it.

to finish a task, whether hard or not requires patience and firmness. therefore when you have some work to do, you must do it faithfully, irrespective of the difficulty. difficulties and obstacles are unavoidable; if you turn your back on meeting them, you will succeed in nothing, but if you can overcome them, you will accomplish something.

to stop halfway is very bad. suppose that a precious stone is at a great distance from you and you want to obtain it; you must reach for it; you must not stop halfway. if you stop halfway, you will not only get nothing, but also lose something, because your time and strength will be wasted.

it is a good thing for one to do one thing at a time, and never stop halfway.

cultivate a reputation for being reliable and hardworking, even if it means bucking peer pressure.

【评语】

作者对不要半途而废的论证具体而有说服力，告诉我们半途而废不仅无法达到目标而且浪费时间、精力。段落安排逐层深入，循循善诱。全文整体结构完整、自然。

【要求】

题目：failure（失败）是一个人经常遇到的。失败不是好事，因为它使人的努力(efforts)付之东流。但是，失败也是好事，它可以教育我们使我们学到更多的东西。试写一短文就此谈谈你对失败的看法。

【范文】

failure

nearly everybody regards failure as a bad thing. the efforts we have made

seem to be of no use and we feel very disappointed. some people even lose the courage to start again or lose interest in life when the failure is a very great one.

but failure can also benefit us. it can teach us a good lesson and make us experienced. also, we can realize our own shortcomings and get a better knowledge of ourselves. so when we start again, we can succeed more easily.

therefore, failure not only disappoints us but also benefits us. when we fail, we should make full use of our failure and learn from our experience. then, we may succeed in the future.

life is made up of ambiguous victories and nebulous defeats----claim them all as victories!

【评语】

本文最大的优点是正反对照，条理清楚。高考作文时间很短，所以谋篇布局显得十分重要。本文脉络清楚，浅显易懂，应该说在考场中是容易取胜的。此外，本篇行文简练，显得干净利落。

要求】

每个人的生活中都有过失败的经历，失败对于我们来说，到底意味着什么？请你按如下提纲写一篇文章，谈谈你对失败的理解。

失败是生活中的常事。

人们对失败的态度各不相同。

就我而言，我认为失败?

【范文】

is failure a bad thing

failure is quite a common thing in our life. as long as we do things we will surely encounter difficulties. of course we should try our best to get over them, but in many cases, it is not so easy, or even impossible. then how should we face failure?

different people take different attitudes towards failure. when faced with failure, some people become frustrated and lose their selfconfidence. they refuse to make any further efforts. these people will probably never amount to anything in life. some people just dont fear failure. they firmly believe that failure is the mother of success. as a result, not only can failure stop them, but they draw useful lessons from it and try even harder. such people are sure to succeed someday.

as for me, i dont think failure is a bad thing. failure can never discourage me but only eich my experience and steel my will. with this positive attitude in mind, i will try hard in anything im determined to accomplish and attain success in the end.

【评语】

本文按题目所给纲要分为三段。首段简要地论述了失败是每个人都会遇到的，末句用了一句设问，起到了承上启下的作用。第二段谈到了人们对失败的两种典型态度，先写错误观点进行铺垫，而后再写正确观点。这种安排自然突出了作者所赞同的态度，同时为引出第三段做好的了准备。末段作者则阐明了自己的观点。全文层次清楚，段落间衔接紧密而自然，主题突出，语言流畅，用词准确。

【要求】

失败，是人人都不愿体验的结果。有人说失败使人消沉，有人说失败是成功之母。你对失败的态度怎样？写一篇短文。

字数150—200字，题目自拟。

【范文】

is failure a bad thing?

failure is a common thing in our daily lives. as students, we sometimes fail to get high scores on our examinations. when we play game, we sometimes cant avoid losing to others. and there are times when we fail to do satisfactory work. all these failures happen naturally and almost every one of us has had such experiences.

however, there are different attitudes towards failure. some people lose heart

in failure, they think the world has come to an end. some people dont take failure seriously and just ignore it, while some others learn much from it.

in my opinion, what really counts is not failure itself, but what we think of failure and do after failure. as long as we believe in ourselves and dont give up, and in the mean time learn something from our failure, well certainly be successful in the end. so im never afraid of failure, for i believe that failure is not a bad thing, but the mother of success.

看问题一定要看到正反两面，体现在文中，就往往是鲜明的对比。

【评语】

表达思想清楚，内容比较充实，文字流畅，句子结构多样。第一段、第二段主题句简练而贴切，句间衔接比较自然，用词造句有不少闪光点，如：the world has come to an end 等。

要求】

请以下面三句话分别作为三段段首的主题句，写一篇题为“诚实”的文章。

it is usually better to be honest than dishonest.

one of the worst things about lying is that it results in a guilty conscience.

honesty makes you happy and gain a good reputation.

【范文】

honesty

we often praise somebody because of his diligence and honesty. so all the people think that honesty is a virtue and that it is the best policy.

it is usually better to be honest than dishonest. people tend to believe an honest man, no matter what he does and what he says. on the contrary, dishonest people are not trustworthy. for this reason, honest people are always more successful than the dishonest. so it is better to be honest because it can help you succeed.

one of the worst things about lying is that it results in a guilty conscience. if a person tells lies, his face will turn red and his heart will beat faster. he will always live in fright.

honesty makes you happy and gains a good reputation. all people consider what youve said true and trust you just because you are an honest man. therefore, you can say what you like and do what you like without fear. you will feel very happy. likewise, just because of your honesty, people respect you and love you. gradually, you will gain a good reputation. to be honest will ensure you a happy life.

【评语】

该文内容切题，详略安排得当，重点放在诚实的益处，即第二段和第四段上。这两段的段末均有一句总结句与段首的主题句相呼应，使段落结构完整，同时强化了主题。文章语言略显单调，但比较顺畅，表达也较清楚。

【要求】

班会课上要求同学们为大家用英文讲述一个小哲理，要求条理清晰，有自己的见解。你的发言稿内容如下：

真诚是一种重要的思想方法。

应该弄清楚什么是真诚。

为什么有时人们难以做到真诚。

真诚，是一种人生态度。

【范文】

on the truth

truth is an attitude of the mind. it is important, if one does not wish to inconvenience and bore his or her friends. it means telling no lies and never backing out of ones word.

but it is more important to know what is the truth, and not to slide into those

untruthful habits of thought which are so pleasant and so easy.

there is a word named “the victory habit of mind”. people who have this mind are unduly preoccupied by what was socially and morally convenient. one should have the courage to think uncomfortably, since it is only by rejecting the convenience that one can come to think the truth.

truth, is an attitude of the life.

直线式思维，层层推进是英文的习惯。避免chinglish不仅仅要防止出错，还要培养语感和思路。

【评语】

这篇短文首尾照应，用同一句式，只换了一个单词：“mind”、“life”，却把意思推进了一层，很符合英

【篇三：英语作文(课文)】

中国传统孝道 traditional chinese filial virtue

as one of the cores of chinese culture, filial piety is not only the moral code for maintaining family relationships in chinese society for thousands of years, but also the traditional virtue of chinese nation.respecting and taking care of the aged-parents is regarded as an obligatory duty in china. chinese people believe that only those who are concerned with and practice filial devotion to their parents would

be honest, faithful and grateful to others and seek ways to return their kindness. there are many stories which show the filial respect in ancient china. taste liquid medicine for mother and stealing oranges to take home for his mother are the most famous two of them.

中国儒家文化confucian culture

confucian culture is guided by confucian thoughts, founded by confucius in chunqiu period, which was later developed by mencius and xun zi, and lasted for more than 2500 years. the central idea is filial piety, loyalty, and integrity, proper rite and righteousness, honesty, cleanness and shame. their core is benevolence. confucianism played a decisive role in the development of chinese culture. based on the four books and five classics, the traditions and principles in the confucianism played an important role in the formation of chinese peoples thinking patterns and teaching methods. confucianism has worldwide influence. in many countries and regions of the world such as the uk, usa, branches of confucius institutes are established in recent years to spread chinese culture and expand the language. in china, you can find many confucius temples, which is an important place for the candidates for important exams.

《三国演义》romance of the three kingdoms

romance of the three kingdoms is one of the four great chinese classics. it is compiled into a semi-fictional literary masterpiece during the ming dynasty by luo guanzhong. the novel comprises around seventy percent fact，and the rest fiction.

some issues such as guan yus weapon weighing around 40 kilograms, the capabilities of lu bu, liu beis horses as well as the existence of the hill of the fallen phoenix and some others are probably fictional.that period in history can be said as the golden age of chivalry . although it happened more than 1700 years ago, characters such as liu bei, cao cao, guan yu, zhang fei and zhuge liang have become household names among the chinese. tales of their exploits, courage, adventures and many more are told in the novel romance of the three kingdoms.

十二生肖the chinese zodiac animal signs

the chinese zodiac animal signs are the chinese way of numbering the years. it attributes an animal to each year, according to a 12-year cycle. since ancient times, the chinese people began to use the heavenly stems and earthly branches to record the passing of years. at this same time, chinese nomadic people who lived in northwest china instead used animals to number the years. the two ways of numbering the years were smoothly integrated, and the chinese zodiac took shape. the 12 animals in the chinese zodiac are: rat, ox, tiger, rabbit, dragon, snake, horse, ram, monkey, rooster, dog and pig. the meaning of the symbolic animal of the birth year is that it can make people magnanimous and be of one mind in times of difficulty. even though the chinese people now number the years and their age under the gregorian calendar, they still continue to use the symbolic animals. as long as people know a persons probable age and his symbolic animal, people can infer his exact age and year of birth.

二十四节气the 24 solar terms

the ancient chinese divided a year into 24 equal segments according to the positions of the sun on the ecliptic. names were given with special connotations for these segments; such as vernal equinox (occurs on march 20 or 21) and pure brightness (occurs on april 4, 5, or 6); and hence they are called the 24 solar terms. originating from the reaches of the yellow river, the 24 solar terms are basically a calendar to govern agricultural arrangements which takes into account the changes in climate and practical agricultural needs. the 24 solar terms are considered a great and unique creation of the ancient chinese.

中国饮食文化chinese food culture

chinese cuisine is of a long history and profound in its variety. chinese people often say, man sees food as the first priority. food is the most essential part of life for human beings. china is rich in her cuisine varieties. the most prominent and influential schools of culinary art are the following ones: lu cuisine (shangdong province), chuan cuisine (sichuan province), yue cuisine (guangdong province), min cuisine (fujian province), su cuisine (jiangsu province), zhe cuisine (zhejiang province), xiang cuisine (hunan province) and hui cuisine (anhui province). they are referred to as the top eight cuisines. all the eight cuisines are fully intertwined with local delicacies, unique traditions and fairytales.

汉字chinese character

chinese characters were initially meant to be simple pictures used to help people remember things. after a long period of development, it finally became a

unique character system that embodies phonetic sound, image, idea, and rhyme at the same time. the earliest chinese characters discovered up to now are jiaguwen dating back more than 3400 years, which are regarded as the original forms of chinese characters. chinese characters have undergone tremendous changes over the ages. from the earliest form of hieroglyph to the character composed of strokes, chinese characters have gone through several calligraphic styles: bronze inscriptions, seal script, official script, regular script, cursive script, running script, etc. chinese characters are usually round outside and square inside, which is rooted in ancient chinese beliefs of an orbicular sky and a rectangular earth. the five basic strokes of chinese characters are “---“ (the horizontal stroke) , “│” (the vertical stroke), “／”(the left-falling curved stroke), “＼” (the right-falling curved stroke), and “乙” (the turning stroke).

中国书法chinese calligraphy

chinese calligraphy is the traditional art of writing chinese characters. after centuries of creation and evolution, chinese calligraphy has become a unique art of lines using a brush to write chinese characters. chinese scripts are generally divided into five categories: the seal script, the official script, the regular script, the cursive script and the running script. the writing techniques of chinese calligraphy are highlighted by the manner of using a brush, the way ink is used, the art of composition, and so on. its harmonious beauty of art is reflected in between the lines. through its unique word structures, writing styles and way of handling the brush, chinese calligraphy with the beauty in different poses, conveys the moral integrity, character, emotions, esthetic feelings and culture of the artist.

中国画traditional chinese painting

traditional chinese painting，also known as dan qing(ink-painting) in ancient time, is the form of art painting on a piece of xuan paper or silk with a chinese brush and black ink or colored pigments. it is regarded as one of the three quintessence of chinese culture, the other two being traditional chinese medicine and beijing opera. the subject matters of chinese paintings can be typically classified into three types, figures, landscapes, birds and flowers. the drawing skills and techniques employed in traditional chinese painting can be categorized into fine brushwork and free-hand brushwork. unlike western sketches which focus on truthful regeneration of subject, the artistic characteristics of traditional chinese paintings pay more attention to verve and artistic conception, emphasizing using the shape to convey the feelings of the painter. in general, traditional chinese paintings are rich in content and forms. besides, its style is grandiose, containing boldness as well as fineness. in terms of the artistic creation, traditional chinese painting is a reflection of the aesthetic consciousness and artistic sentiment of the chinese people.

文房四宝four treasures of the study

the writing brush, ink stick, ink stone, and paper were requisite treasures in the study of the scholars of ancient china. they are often referred to as the four treasures of the study. a chinese brush is made primarily of hairs from a beast and a small bamboo pipe. the best-known chinese brush is manufactured in huzhou, zhejiang province. chinese calligraphers and painters paid particular attention to

the quality of the ink stick. the best ink stick is produced in huizhou, anhui province. the best paper used for writing or painting with a chinese brush is called xuan paper since it was produced in a place near xuancheng in anhui province. xuan paper is white, smooth, refined, even, soft and absorbent. as soon as the ink touches the paper it quickly seeps in, which can best present the characteristics of chinese calligraphy and painting. the ink stone is used for grinding the ink stick in order to make ink. the best-known is called duanyan ink stone produced in duanxi, guangdong province. paper, ink stick, chinese brush and ink stone have played very important roles in the development of traditional chinese calligraphy and painting.

京剧beijing opera

as the most popular and influential opera in china, beijing opera has a history of more than 200 years and is regarded as a genuine national quintessence of china. it originated from many kinds of ancient local operas, especially the anhui troupes in southern china. at the end of the 19th century, beijing opera evolved and took shape, becoming the greatest kind of opera in china. different from the western dramas, beijing opera is a blend of performing arts. through the four artistic means and the four basic skills of beijing opera — singing, recitation, acting, and acrobatic fighting, beijing opera completely portrays and narrates the plot and characters. the characters of beijing opera are classified into different types according to sex, age, disposition, profession and social status. the main types of roles in beijing opera are sheng (male), dan (female), jing (a male with painted face) and chou (clown, male or female).

中国武术chinese martial arts

chinese kung fu, or chinese martial art, carries traditional chinese culture in abundance. it is a traditional chinese sport which applies the art of attack and defense in combat and the motions engaged with a series of skill and tricks. according to the formation of chinese characters, 武 is made up of 止 and 戈. the former means stop while the latter means any kind of weapon. the combination of the two means stopping martial actions. with 术，which means strategies, the term means using methods and skills to stop martial actions and activities. the core idea of chinese kung fu is derived from the confucian theory of cultivating qi of both the mean and harmony. meanwhile, it also includes thoughts of taoism and buddhism. with a long history and multi-various sects, chinese martial art has many different boxing styles, emphasizing coupling hardness with softness and internal and external training. it contains the ancient great thinkers pondering of life and the universe.